My imagination was running wild long before I got to the end of the story. I have now taken THREE cold showers and it ain’t working… According to the Viagra ads I’m going to have to go to the emergency room in about 30 minutes, oh but wait, I don’t take Viagra, does that matter?
Very well done!!!
Previous to his arrival, she walks around her space, lighting several candles placed in strategic areas, The room is filled with lavendar, sage and jasmine scents...She adjust the lighting to resemble a beautiful sunset just peeking through the window. The faint smoke from the incense looks mysterious and erotic. She selects music that gets her in the mood and keeps her there. She is now ready for her lover. She hopes he is ready for her.
She has just finished preparing for her date and the phone rings...It's him. As she talks quietly and seductively on the phone, he answers nervously as she tells him where to walk... He now is quite stilmulated, both mentally as well as physically . He makes it to the designated location as instructed, and she "buzzes" him in, instructing him where to enter...She is nervous and hopes there will be a connection between her and her new 1st time lover. Is he real? Is he part of law enforcement? Nah, her legal disclaimer is iron clad (in her own mind). She hears the main entrance door close and imagines him walking down the hallway to the entrance of her loft. The security door closes behind him...Here he comes! Breathless with anticipation (term stolen from a TER hobbyist), she opens the door and stragegically allows her leg to peek out, covered in beautiful black lace thigh highs. She has started the seduction as he walks towards her door, even before entering her web.
She opens the door 1/2 way and sort of leans between the door and its frame. He looks up, bright eyed and nervous looking. He looks adorable to her. He is smiling and seems happy with his "selection."
She quietly guides him over her threshold and in her loft. As she closes the door behind them she warmly says; "I am so happy you came." He smiles as she wraps both arms around his shoulders and kisses his neck. She softly touches the sides of his head, looks into his eyes, gives him a big smile and softly kisses him on the lips. After which she gently guides his head to her bossom and holds him in a long embrace. She wants him to completly take in her scent. His eyes are closed as he breathes deeply, taking her in.
She takes his jacket and invites him to sit on the couch. Dawn approaches as the sun rests, making the high rise buildings off the lakefront look almost gothic, provocative and powerful.
She offers wine, he chooses white. She quietly talks as she is preparing the bottle of wine. They exchange plesantries as she pours 2 glasses then sits close to him. His eyes are wide as he looks very eager, stimulated. She speaks with such elegance, he cannot believe her beauty. As she speaks to him, she decides to be the agressor and will seduce him. She thinks, this is going to be really fun!
She finishes talking for the moment as he is now verbally sharing his thoughts. It is not that she isn't listening to him, she is simply in sexual mode and wants to know what he has hidden in his jeans. Sex is in her eyes. He continue's to talk nervously as she sits with her legs curled on the couch and resting her hands on his thighs...she smiles as he continues to chat about nothing important. He starts to studder slightly and she knows, he is ready. He continues to talk as she stands in front of him, bend down and straddles his lap. She then slowly guides his head to her chest once again as she slowly kisses his neck, ears, face, cheeks, lips, nose..enveloping his head between her arms and body.
Slowly she stands up and holds out her hands, he rests his hands in hers. She then guides him from the couch, bringing him to his feet. They are facing one another. He is breathing a little heavy and she gets excited at his attraction to her. As they face one another holding hands, she walks slowly backwards and she gently pulls him along with her.. As she stops, she guides his lips to hers and they are nibbling on one anothers lips, ultimately their tongues touch. She feels that burning flip flop sensation in her lower tummy and taks a long slow deep breath. She is ready to take him...
She continues to walk backwards to her room as she unbottons his shirt, untucking and pulling the shirt from his arms. She then drops to her knees, unbottons his slacks and bends over to remove his shoes. He can feel her warm breath against his sex. The trousers drop as he smoothly steps out of them, leaving the slacks in the hallway on the way to the bedroom. She giggles at the trail of his clothes left behind.
By the time they get to the bedroom, only his boxer briefs remain. She takes care of those right away, again going to her knees and slipping the calvin cliens off of him. He reaches between her legs and feels her bulge but, she slowly guides his hands to her soft breasts, showing him how to seductively pinch her nipples between his fingers. She guides his mouth to her nipples and as he suckles one, then the other, back and forth, back and forth. She is now breathing heavily and it is obviously ready for more.
She seats him on the end of the bed, coddling his head into her lovely chest. He kisses her breasts and works his way very slowly down her tummy to the top of her panties. He feels the bulge behind her panties and starts breathing very heavy. They guide on another on the bed and start to make out, caressing everywhere.
As they snuggle and kiss and discover each others
"start" buttons, they softly kiss one another from head to
tow, slowly removing one anothers clothing as they
explore one another with their hands and lips. She thinks to her self, we have a connection!
She guides him to his tummy and gently rests her body on his, giving him a warm embracing hug while nibbling on his neck and ears. She pours a wonderfully scented oil into her hands to warm it, then massages and caress his back. She is gently sitting on his backside and as she moves her hips back and her hands push forward on his back, he feels her groin pressing against his bottocks. Slowly she works her way down his entire body, rubbing her womanhood against every inch of his body. She continues to massage his butt, slowly moving downward along his thighs and calves while kissing him and running her soft lips along his body
the entire time. The feeling is wonderful and endless.
At some point, his senses are peaked and he desires more of her. He wants to take control and slowly turns around to gently position her onto her back, kissing and touching as he caress her entire body with his hands and lips. He continues to nibble, kiss and run his lips along her body including her tummy, breasts, neck, face, ears and lips. She is filled with desire as she archs her back as she caress his arms, returning the gentle kisses wherever his body moves.
She cant take it, again takes control and then takes him softly but confidentally into her arms, slowly guiding him onto his tummy. As she caress and runs her lips up and down his body, he caresses her wherever he can, forcing shivers of delight and butterflies in her tummy. She feels goose bumps on her skin and her womanhood swells to its maximum size. She can barely stand the anticipation of his next move as she begin to breathe harder and harder with every touch. She desires his mouth around her sex so she positions herself in a manner she can watch his facial expression as her erection grows harder and harder in his mouth.
She proudly watches him take in her now swollen and erect womanhood, inch by inch. She hopes he knows how to breath as the head reaches his throat.
Breathless with anticipation,
- Jas
-- Modified on 12/21/2007 11:17:10 PM
Yum-yum!
"She is now ready for her lover."
"she opens the door and strategically allows her leg to peek out
"She wants him to completely take in her scent."
"As she speaks to him, she decides to be the aggressor and will seduce him."
"She is ready to take him..."
"She then drops to her knees, unbuttons his slacks..."
"only his boxer briefs remain. She takes care of those right away"
"She is filled with desire as she arches her back "
"Slowly she works her way down his entire body, rubbing her womanhood against every inch of his body."
"She proudly watches him take in her now swollen and erect womanhood, inch by inch."
(swooooooon) Who knew that coming here for chit-chats and reviews also afforded one with a view of what heaven must be like?
Truly Beautiful writing, describing the moments of anticipation....
Jasmine, you have outdone yourself. That is just the kind of porn story that I have craved for many years, but never found. You have as great a gift for the fantasy as you have for the reality. You have a gift as a writer that enables you to bring the act to the page. You are a precious and rare human being.
Please, take to offense, but this is not porn IMO, but rather Jasmine has just authored the definitive Art Of Seduction manual in its entirety. I'm on the next flight to Chicago ti interview the Author.
OXOXO
- Jas
Ah, the Lady is not only bright and beautiful, but oh so intuitive. Yes, I would anticipate
an in depth and probing interview. Happy Holidays!
My imagination was running wild long before I got to the end of the story. I have now taken THREE cold showers and it ain’t working… According to the Viagra ads I’m going to have to go to the emergency room in about 30 minutes, oh but wait, I don’t take Viagra, does that matter?
Very well done!!!
...besides, what better way to release than to allow me to have my way with you....
OXOXO
- Jas
Make that 4 cold showers. And you are right, a visit would do SO MUCH better. But meanwhile,
[Fixed your link to the image below - hope I got it right... TST]
-- Modified on 12/23/2007 10:08:58 PM
That has convinced me who will be THE one for me Jasmine can have me any time any way she wants.
This was more of the Fantasy I would of had in mind.
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As she watches with anticipation awaiting his next move she feels his tongue moving around her womanhood. She starts to arch her back and slowly the feeling grows from pleasure to exhilaration. She finds herself trying to hold back, which only further excites her. Emotion has now taken over. She is trying to thrust her hips but he has her swallowed and pinned to the bed. She unbelievably feels and senses that he is in control and wants all of her. She feels the beginnings of an orgasmic quake from within. She realizes that she is begging and pleading that he not stop. She starts to moan uncontrollably and is quivering and shaking as her legs spring to life and as if they have a mind of there own encompass him around the shoulders.
Her back is now arched as to let him know that it is his for the taking. She is impulsively screaming “ I am cuming - Oh God I am Cuming” He continues to suck hard and long. Trying to drain her of every drop of love that she has. Her whole body is now convulsing and heaving up and down. He has her entirely swallowed and has his tongue wrapped around the base of her. She starts to come and as she feels herself explode in him she also feels him begin to frantically swallow. He is taking all the love she can give as she looks up she a few drops ooze out of the cone of his glistening lips. She is totally fulfilled and watches as he slowly and delicately moves himself up her shaft as he lick and sucks all of her remaining juice. She is totally taken and as she slumps she feels his tongue move around her thigh as she is slowly rolled over.
She knows now that he is ready for his turn and she knows what he wants. She is now on her stomach, his hot tongue caressing her rose bud from behind. She can not believe it but her body is acting as if it has a mind of it’s own. She finds herself arched heaving her backside into the air. He is now going from the follower to the leader. Her actions seem to be awakening another side of him that was not there before. He is now taking control of her. He grabs her by the waist with on arm and pulls her into the air. His face buried between her beautiful sweat glistened cheeks. He is probing her deep with his tongue. He is demanding that he will have her all to himself. She is nervous with anticipation her heart begins to beat faster as he tells her she will be his. He pulls her by the waist with both hands, He is at full attention now. She feels him rubbing between her cheeks. He is slowly working on her. In and out - further in at every push.
She begins to push back. Knowing that it will be better slow but wanting it now. She screams to him “Take Me” and with one giant thrust he completes the connection. She screams out “Yes” and as he thrusts harder deeper and faster she is screaming “ Faster- Faster”
He is now to the point of eruption. She can feel him begin to pull in deep and hold on. She is now running on pure emotion. The power of the feeling has taken control of her. He erupts, and as she feels him explode in her and as she feels the Hot juice pour out she screams "I am yours"
Slowly the warm cascade stops, and suddenly with out warning, he pulls out and grabs her by the waist and pulls her into the air. As she feels the hot love drain from her she is shocked to feel his tongue once again take control of her flower. She is overwhelmed by the feeling. She can not believe the passion and emotion. He has taken her body into his soul and is using it all.
Finally he slowly lets her down on the bed and collapses next to her. She now knows the meaning of the word passion. As he gently kisses her she knows that these moments are what make life worth living. It is the reason she was given feeling.
As he makes his way to the shower to get ready to leave, she is left to wonder why some connect and some do not. He reappears dressed and ready. As they say there goodbyes she is left to wonder - Love or Lust?
Thats a hot story
Jas,
Well, that is one way to end the story.
I think we need to find a publisher.
-- Modified on 12/25/2007 7:24:23 PM