My initial thoughts: on the positive side, nice photos, contact form looks good, and no music.  On the negative side, you should probably not spell out in detail what you offer and you should have your rates specified.

Overall, you're on the right track.  Too bad I'm further up the coast, or I'd give you a call myself.

Nice pictures, good contact info, but way too many details on services.  By posting a detailed list, you open yourself up to drama if and when you are unwilling to provide something that is on the menu for one reason or another.

Now speaking as a mod, where is the TER signage?  Remember, if you want to link to your site on TER's boards, you have to display either the TER banner or badge on either your entry (adult content warning page), or your home page.

Looks good, and hope it works for you!

Easy to navigage. As a hobbyist I like seeing the services but the comments of others are legitimate in terms of how you run your business.
 Your photos are nice. When I click on them, however, the "full size" is still fairly small. Any way they can blow up to a larger size?
 And thank you for no music.
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Hello Janelle,
Have to agree with the gang here, little too much information on the services provided. I'd keep it simple with GFE, DFK, maybe DATY .. that tends to cover most of the bases guys are looking for. Whatever else happens beyond that is between consenting adults of legal age and is never asked to be compensated for etc etc etc, you know what I mean?

Smoking hot pictures, I envy your photographer. I have a camera can I come over?! Lol

Your rates are listed, but it will be nice when they're placed in that little box. Many guys will probably not read that they're listed just above. If they are going to stay listed above, increase the font size and keep it the same as everywhere else on your site.

Nice layout, easy to navigate, no music is always a plus too. I dislike the site doing what it does to ladies photos. So many ladies are using this website template and it tends to make the pictures so small and hard to see.

I'd also suggest adding your measurements. How tall you are ... those legs look like they're a mile long BTW ... measurements are always helpful to a lot of guys. Somehow brings out an enticing factor in a lady, especially one as sexy as you.

Overall it's a great site. Spelling and grammar are fine. Keep it up and maintain it regularly. If you're going to have a blog, add to it often. Keep your pictures as current as possible. I tend to suggest every 4 - 6 months. Having and maintaining such a professional looking site will do wonders for your business!

Licks and kisses,
Jimbo

PS. Don't forget to get your TER seal of approval added to your homepage.

Hi,

I see this website template used often and would suggest going with something original. The money spent will pay off many times over. Quite a few providers use this template and it's stale.

But, if you stay with it here are my comments for what they're worth.

Love the pictures but they need to be larger when clicked on. Agree on including your measurements, height, etc. I'd like to see more on your "About Me" page. You don't need to disclose much but knowing things like your interests, favorite movie(s) book(s), food, etc, makes the surfing experience more personal and less like a service. I'd dump the services section, mentioning GFE is typically enough.

If you link to a blog you have to keep it up to date.

Linking to reviews on TER is a must.

Dump your age. You're hot and I would never have guessed it. I prefer to keep it a mystery.

PM me if you want more advice. I'm in Tampa ands would love to see another provider do well in this market.

Looking at this from the angle of 'would I book a session', there's alot I like, and only a few changes I'd suggest.

    It looks like you have an incall, it'd be nice to know for sure. The handwashing thing is rether nice in that it seems FIV is available, which I absolutely love! I'm a construction electrician who lives about an hour from where I usually work and hobby.  Obviously, if I'm seeing you after work (my usual time), I'd need a shower first.  This isn't a problem if I'm getting the room, but it'd be nice to know it's available at your incall. Maybe something like 'I'm always completely clean and fresh for our encounter, and would like you to be as well. If needed, a shower is certainly available. (and I might just join you...)'.

    The 'about me' page...a typical session for me is about 1/2 the time spent either getting to know you, or catching up if we've seen each other before.  If you'd write something like 'I was born and raised in a small town in.....well, you get the idea.  I'd really like to know a little about you before I see you.  If nothing else, it's a good ice-breaker when we first meet.

    I really don't think much of password protected pics, though I understand the reasons for it. I guess it'd be ok if the password was easy to get.  I also enjoy a full-frontal, fully nude pic, 'cause that's a preview of what I'll see when we 'get comfortable'. A big turn-on for me!

    Would I schedule some time with you based on the site as-is?  Almost certainly, provided I live about 3000 miles closer!  Overall, pretty good.

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Hello Janelle,

Ihave to agree with a few of the comments already made here. I like your site and the ease with which I can navigate through it. Thanks ever so much for not putting music on it.

I find that several of you pics do blow up to a decent size while others remain dreadfully small. I think this probably has more to do with the original file of the image and not something you did. It is however easily corrected.

You are quite stunning from what I gather from your photos. I would love to photograph you for your website anytime if you need the help. I am a fine-art photographer from the Tampa Bay area. If you'd like some new work shot just let me know and I will forward you a link to my website. You can check out my work and get back to me.

Stay yummy!