I created a website for a very nice lady in Tucson and would love to hear any comments or problems you have with the site.

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especially in grammar and punctuation! You know how picky I am.

Hugs,
Ciara

My suggestion would relate to the photo gallery. The sheets should be tucked in, floor picked up, ironing board and fan put away. In general just straightened up for my tastes. Banker

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Thank Youz:

Letz git piky twogeter, Sweet won

I was going to suggest the same. The colors could be a little better, too. But the main thing is correcting the misspellings and the punctuation. Good grammar and spelling are clues to choosing a lady who is trustworthy and professional in my opinion. Spell check is simple and simple proofreading can correct the errors in sentence structure and content.

In terms of the colors, I think the pink is too pink and the red is a little, I don't know..something. I just think the color coordination could be better, but that is minor compared to the spelling, punctuation and sentence structure. After all, this is a business and would you trust a bank, realitor or even a spa or massage therapist if the website was full of misspellings and poor grammar?

Megan

I guess my anal tendencies come from being a former journalist and editor (but I still write). I make mistakes, too. In fact, writers usually make more mistakes writing than when editing someone else's work. However, I agree that when I look at websites (and even street signs), my attention is immediately drawn to spelling, grammar and punctuation errors. I assume my attention to being precise about websites has something to do with me also being a part-time graphic artist. By the way, Megan, you spelled realtor wrong.  Hugs, girlfriend.

Hugs,
Ciara

my advice is that a website should always leave room for "credible deniability" just in case somebody tries to turn your fine work into "Peoples' Exhibit #1".  Seems to me that she might have a little trouble claiming "all I get paid for is time" when this graphic is displayed.  Just a thought.

As a stewdent I never cared much fer English.  My focuss was on other desciplines and I felt it writting was mundine and irelevant.  As time pastd I’ve come to modifie my posittion and to aprechiate the importence proper writting skills.  I envie those who can comunicate efectivelie and propertlie in writtin form. But the truth is in the passed I’ve develouped such badd habits it’s defficult for me to recognise or corectd them now.  So Megan and Ciara if you will pleese forgave my writting errors in the pastd, precent and future.  Right is right and you both obviouslie are acomplished writters.  Please fill free to point out any and all corections to anythang I may pin.  To learne is to grow, and Bigger is obviouslie Better!