Good morning all! I have been lurking here for several weeks trying to absorb as much information as possible before foisting myself on the TER community. I've learned a great deal(thanks BCG for the great inquiries), yet the more I learn, the more I realize I don't know. Yeesh! Too bad. Big girls don't whine, so here are my lil questies. Would any of you sweethearts take a peek at my(barebones) website and share your opinion on the prose? I'm fully aware the pics are too few and working on that next. I suppose being a writer compelled me to focus on sharing myself first in print. (Can't be anyone but me, I'm afraid.) I would also appreciate if anyone would kindly share their opinion on which pages I should state my age(43). No desire to deceive those who prefer younger ladies. Thank you for taking the time to read this and wishing you all a blessed New Year! My best to you, Desi
P.S. Hope I'm not violating any Terms by including my website in my post. Not much fun looking over your shoulder!
This is the kind of website I am looking for. Looks really good. I was able to navigate everything I needed to know in less than 60 seconds.
I will just provide one piece of advice...
In the Contact Section, you might want to consider providing your work email. This will give your potential clients chance to contact you either by using the form or directly by email. Some people are just not comfortable using the form, and I see that many good providers provide another way of contacting them..
And yes, a few more pics will definitely be nice..
They usually don't allow links in the post since there is a box at the bottom for links to be added. However, since the did, I'll give you my answers. Your website is fine, IMHO. Yes, more pics would be a good idea, but they do not need to be explicit sexual ones. If you want to let potential clients know how old you are, the 'About Me' section is the place for it. Instead of giving your exact age, you might just say you are in your early 40's. You can always tell him your true age when you meet.
Thank you, kindly. I was afraid I had made some sort of faux pas, but there is so much information to absorb here, I suppose I got some of it mixed up in my head. Will investigate a way to modify my original post. So much to learn....
If you haven't done so yet, read the self help center, link under life preserver at top of page. It will answer many questions you have. If you don't get all your answers, feel free to ask here, that's what this forum is for.
It takes a lot for me to post here. When I went and looked at your pictures I was FLOORED at how beautiful you are. The blood left the large head and the small head started typing - I have MAD skills ! Only comment is your "age" question ........ ALWAYS be honest in ALL aspects of life !!! It's what we teach our children so we need to practice what we preach ! Women are so hung up on their age especially when they get older - I don't get that ! Young "girls" are just that - little girls that are simply not on my plateau of life. I simply can't connect with them. I am 46 and will ONLY see a mature lady !!!! They are so fucking sexy,confident, understand men SO MUCH more and when they start the seduction I am putty in their hands Little girls don't know how to be seductive and just get down to buisness which is missing half the ride
DAMN your GEORGEOUS !!!! I would love to use your heels as handlebars ALL night ! FUCK !!!!
Posted By: FlaSailorRon
Unfortunate, I am so far away, maybe a vacation due.
Uhhh......how did I miss this earlier? My feminine ego and I, thank you! Gotta go now. Keyboard literally melting in my hands. Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And to all, a good night! Desi-Hoo-Ray!
You picts are a nice start. I always say they need not be totally explicit but taken in total I want to know what my date will look like naked. A variety of dress & undress... gives me confidence that the pictures are a real woman & not stolen somewhere. There is a wealth of information on this board & after you've read through the self help section (although intended for guys, there's info for ladies too)... read back on this board. It's FREE but a good investment in information. Best Wishes,
1) agree with all the others needing more pics. At least 10, more if you can.
2) Your text looks choppy, at least on my browser (safari). You have spaces after some paragraphs and not after others. It would look neater if everthing was brought to the far left column.
3) For your rates, I would put what you actual charge for hours 2 and 3 rather than how much more they are than hour one. I dont think I have ever seen it done the way you have done it but I also dont think it is all that difficlut to figure out either for the gent.
4) hot link your email addy on your website. At the very least, allow the gents to copy and paste your email address. That is disabled on your site.
So all in all, I am talking about very minor changes, except for the pictures. Men are visual beings and you never know which pic may do it for which guy.
Also, I think you should spell out Orange County as there may be some who don't know that OC means that.
Finally, since you have an interactive TER logo and reviews, you should request of administration that they link your site to all posts that you write on here, just to make things more efficient.
All and all, a very nice site, and I'll be looking forward to more photos. The ones you have are a nice start.
is well done, easy to navigate, and pleasing to the eye with good use of color, no flying butterflies or annoying music. Yes, more photos are needed but you already said you were working on that.
Add the email contact (as has already been suggested) to go along with your new pics and you are ready for 2013. I wish you were not located on the left coast.
See if you can hyper link your ter id to your page...same with P411
Someone else already said left justify, as the text looks choppy. And, although I am not an old guy, bigger text might be helpful.
I have also seen many girls have a schedule or calendar page. When used, it is extremely helpful. If you intend on touring at all, it will be a huge benefit to you.
One little nit picky thing was on you donations page...(leaving the envelope in the first 10 min) Your waayy too nice about this. Its your time...the envelope should be placed where you want it immediately. If not sooner.
As to your age, the about me section is just fine...perhaps you could do a stat graph. Height, weight, age, measurements...etc
Otherwise...the site is very nice, easy to use, and you are very, very, easy on the eyes ;-D
Lovely, just lovely. Thank you! I like the idea of a "stat graph", just haven't figured out where to incorporate it on the "Get to know Desiree"(about) page. All business and too little sassy sweetness, is NOT me. I'm experimenting with how to state the facts without sounding sterile. Ahh, the curse of being a writer. Lol!
Thank you to all who have been so encouraging and kind enough to share their knowledge and personal opinions. I hope to connect with gentlemen who are interested in my particular type, so learning what grabs their interest as quickly and effortlessly as possible(for them), is a gift.
I have incorporated some of your suggestions(still working on more) and would appreciate any feedback and opinions on additional adjustments I should make.
The following is a partial list of the changes I've made.
1. Enlarged the text in as many places as the site's designer's have allowed. (mrfisher, bless you for stating the obvious!)
2. My email address is now prominently displayed at the top of my Contact page. The template or whatever it's called, has a place to enter my email address and states that it will be displayed on the Contact Page I believe, but despite the fact I filled in my email, it did not appear. Gotta find the right Settings button, I suppose. Working on it. Hopefully, that will create the hotlink and make it an easy "click" to utilize. I'm a little curious as to why someone might be uncomfortable with using the contact form to communicate with me though.
3. Added my Incall/Outcall info. at the top of my Home page. I hope it doesn't seem "tacky"(to quote my grandmother). It's not as enticing as the fun stuff I enjoyed writing, but very likely a priority to many people, just not sure where it belongs.
4. Added my TER and P411 IDs to the top of the "About" page, aka "Get to know Desiree". A little concerned about this placement for the same reason stated in No. 3. Tried hyperlinking, but haven't mastered this yet. Sometimes it works for me, sometimes it doesn't. (Plan to keep trying though.)
5. I too noticed the "choppy" and randomly spaced sentences and paragraphs last night(Thank you BPMan and others), but it wouldn't allow me to fix the issue. I had better luck today and hope it no longer looks like such a mess. Thank you also, for pointing out the goofy way I listed the time/donation information. I hope it's better now. If only I could find a way to enlarge the text in the list. I was only able to enlarge the blather on the top of the page. Heck, I can barely read the actual donations myself! Such an important piece of info. too. Will be writing to the design site regarding this issue and hopefully have the page adjusted soon.
6. Spelled out Orange County, CA as opposed to OC, in places where it was needed. Thanks again, mrfisher! Gotta work on that link thing you suggested still.
7. No calendar needed as yet. Nowhere near ready to tour, although I wish I was. What fun!
8. There's a "custom" page available. I thought it might be helpful to describe what I prefer, as far as "etiquette" goes. It's not working for me yet, but I'm sure it's only a matter of contacting the design site. Any one have an opinion on whether this "free reign" page could be used in a more productive way? I think being upfront regarding what I prefer, is only fair. Would this help avoid uncomfortable surprises?
Please accept my humble appreciation to all. Just delighted to be here! Desiree
if the default is the same as what the hobbyist normally uses. For me, I would prefer an email address that can easily be copied and then pasted into the email account I use for P4P.
Thank you for offering your advice. I'm having a bit of trouble understanding this phrase though: "Looking into the users reps and history". Would you mind helping me figure out what this means? Regards, Desi P.S. Happy New Year to all!!!!
Users "reputations" and history. For some bizarre reason, I misinterpreted it to mean users "representatives". Threw me for a loop. Ugh! New Year's Resolution no. 1: Get more sleep! Dez
Posted By: jjj1
I suggest you do a lot of homework. Looking into the users reps and history...pay attention and google user names for useful info.
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