I spent the better part of a day writing my first review and it wasn't approved. The girl has been seen by several well known people in my area. I was told I need to keep writing reviews in order to build a history here. Why on earth would I write another review just to have it denied once again? Does anyone have any pointers to help me out?

check my feedback in your account manager for a specific message from TER as to what is wrong with the review.

Well, No offense but writing a review should not take the better part of the day.  Mine are freaking novels and it never takes me more than half an hour.  Maybe yours are too long?

None taken. You do have 46 more reviews than me.

I looked and didn't see anything different. I apologize as I don't do this all the time. Can you possibly pm me?

If reviews are denied, you can correct the problems & resubmit them within 90 days...  very generous, IMHO.  Just edit it.  
The biggest problem, after new reviewers trying to review unreviewed ladies...  is expired ads.  Ads have a short life these days.  Better to use her web site & skip the ad if she has one.  
skb
10 TER reviews

You can develop a history by posting on the various boards.  Remember you have up to 3 months to post the review.  

If you can afford to play, you should be able to afford the extra $ to by VIP.  Long time ago someone said "you need to speculate to accumulate."    

There is no option to edit it.

I am VIP and still having these issues.

Maybe it's different for non-VIP.  I go to account manager, click on my reviews, there's a button on the left to "view" or "edit".  
If not, then cut & paste the review, revise it, paste it into a new review window...  
Sometimes I use an e-mail program in another tab for this so I can do spell check.
skb
I just had a review approved on the second try.

I am VIP and there is no option to "edit".