I'm new and I was wondering if some of the veterans would be so kind as to give me a little advice.
I've been trying to think what else I need to put on my website (other than new pictures) to be more thorough. I would especially love to hear from the gents to see what kind of information I'm lacking.
Also, if anyone knows how to get a better website for free, like a different template, that would be great!
Thanks,
Caroline
...would be to have a page describing your personality in more detail. I think this is particularly important for "GFE" providers. We guys who look for that kind of experience like to do our part to make it special, so some more specific clues about what you like to do with your time would help a lot in "sucking us in." 
_What_ do you like to read? _Where_ do you like to volunteer? What's your favorite kind of food? Even, what's your major in school? These bits of info are what make you unique and would make me really want to meet you...
And a very important part of this page is a list of things you would appreciate as gifts! (_Real_ things I mean, not, say, a sports car... ) If I know what kind of wine you like, what stores you frequent, whether you appreciate flowers, what fruits / chocolates tickle your taste buds...then I can make us both happier when I arrive with something appropriate in hand.
OBTW, those are some hot photos! Let me know when you take a trip to sunny Orlando...(everyone visits WDW eventually, right?)
P.S. I wouldn't worry about the template; the design of your site is fine, and it's the content that will make you stand out. Or make _me_ "stand out," as the case may be.
Because I'm not VIP. You can email me instead, just fyi. Thanks!
You may want to add on what services might be provided. also info on whether you are willing to travel. some info on your dimensions. I agree with seperate area about yourself, gifts. Maybe a section on etiquette. By the way is that incall or out call or either?
lots of guys (myself included) refuse to fill out those kinds of forms on websites since there's no offer of security or encryption so the information is just "out there"
i'd suggest at least saying the information can be sent to your e-mail address, and possibly just dumping that form altogether
heinous
The site is fine, but regarding the photos I have two suggestions:
1. Find a way for them to open up larger so that they fill most of the screen instead of just a small portion of it as they do now.
2. I understand not wanting to show your face, but there is no reason to chop your head off either. Have photos where you are looking away or use your hair to conceal your features. The chopped off head and/or blurred face photos are not very becoming.
Best of luck to you.
If you plan to tour other cities, a calendar would be nice. Check out some other provider websites to get some ideas.
Try not to get too crazy cluttering the site up.
As suggested, some additional info about you. Don't list services, IMO. That's just asking for too much trouble.
Many ladies use the canned web sites and they're fine.
This is actually a good start. Look at other ladies sites to see what you like and do not.
Thank you all for the great advice! I took some notes and I'm going to start working on it tonight!
Exhib - I love WDW and I was actually thinking about applying to intern there next summer... Hopefully you'll still be around!
Chuck - I do both incalls and outcalls. I'll make that more clear when I redo it.
Again, I really appreciate the help! I'll be working to incorporate all of your ideas 
Oh I'm sure I'll still be around the area, I love it here. I sincerely wish you very good luck in securing a position with WDW... If you get to be a "face" character, Ariel's my fave...mmmm fantasies... I think they let you bring the outfits home, right?
Hey, I just checked out your website again -- much much MUCH better! Wow, I wish you were interning here already; I'd love to meet you, like, today! 
Two "new" comments:
1) Your etiquette section seems a little harsh-sounding to someone who's not a newbie. (*I* understand what you're saying, but I also understood it without it being said...) Also, a little nitpick -- you say in "Etiquette" something like "no photos ever," but in your FAQ you say you'd love to have photos taken by someone who knows what they're doing...
2) You already know this but...more pictures please! (And bigger ones, too...)
Overall, though, I think your website now effectively presents you as a beautiful lady inside and out. Works well for me!
-- Modified on 7/28/2010 9:24:02 AM
Nice changes. Too bad you are not in the philly area.
There are some typos on your etiquite page. Templates work fine.
All in all a good start. Advertize weekly on your local board, participate so members get to know you.
skb
DISCLAIMER:
I am a web designer, so take any comments I make with that in mind.
Free sites are OK, but when you ask for $300/hr and $500/ 2 hours; that you don't buy VIP here and only want a free site kind of says you want to make money but not have to invest in your business to do so.
As for the Terms of the "free" site you are using:
__________________________________________________
None of the Posted Content shall be subject to any obligation of confidence on our part, and we shall not be liable for any use or disclosure of any such information or content. Without limitation of the foregoing, we shall exclusively own all rights to all such Posted Content, in all media, technologies, and other formats now existing or later developed, of every kind and nature throughout the universe, and shall be entitled to unrestricted use of the Posted Content for any purpose whatsoever, commercial or otherwise, without compensation to you or any other provider or owner of the Posted Content.
__________________________________________________
They own all your text and all your pictures...not exactly free, huh?
Thanks again! I'm glad you think it's better!
I reread the Etiquette section and I think you're right - it is a little harsh. That's something I'll have to get creative with.
I may tour eventually, but it probably won't be for a while. I will definitely post in the cities I visit and I hope you'll remember my name!
SKB- I think I fixed the typos, thanks!
Web Terrorist- Completely agree, although I do believe I get VIP for free with a review (and I do have one pending,) correct? I've been shopping for a designer and a professional photographer for when I'm ready to invest. I actually saw a post or ad of yours on another board, but no info/portfolio. Perhaps you would consider helping me out? I can't receive pm's yet but you can email me with your info if you're interested in taking my money! My email is listed on my website under the "Contact" page (wasn't sure if it was kosher to list it in a post.)
-- Modified on 7/28/2010 4:58:53 PM
You get limited VIP for having your reviews attached to your username on the boards.
That will allow you to PM folks, and read your own reviews.
Full VIP will allow you to read all the reviews a prospective client has made, which is a good screening step as you can tell a lot about a client by how he writes about his encounters and the ladies.
