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Re:Young & Pettite
MissHoney 21493 reads
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Hi my name is Val and I'm a 20 year old Pettite brunnette with baby blue eyes, all natural and a little shy....See my picture and decide for yourself if you like to spend some quality time with me....

etellier 1 Reviews 19813 reads
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Dear Val:

You look lovely, however "Pettite" is spelled: "p-e-t-i-t-e" and
"brunnette" spelled: "b-r-u-n-e-t-t-e".

Your use of future conditional tense :"if you like to spend some quality time with me" requires the word "would" or
"could".

Other than your spelling and grammar, you look fine.


chrisj_ny 1 Reviews 19296 reads
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That is just so funny !! lol

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