Too much fluff at the beginning. My suggestion to you is to add a "skip intro" option, before you risk losing those pressed for time and simply want to get to your site info. No reason for all that.
Agree with the above comment also wanted to caution you about the Playboy logo. The Playboy folks are nortorious for the aggressive protection of their logo. I have heard that even girls that have an association with the magazine itself have been harrassed about using their trademark bunny logo on their sites.
Skipp intro please Oh some breast implants would help! a flat chest isnt very exciting i mean theres nothing there!!!!!!!! have you ever take any female hormones in your life?... r u really a transsexual? honest please!
Honey.... your Web Master is very creative but has no marketing skills. All the above posts are right on. Hang a visitor too long and they loose interest. Great scheme but have the WM tone it down and take the advise of ditching the Bunny before you get sued. Short of that you are a real cutie.
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