so since i was having a bit of trouble with authentication and legit clients, i finally got my site done, hopefully this helps. thoughts?
The only thing I might add is your location. In the about me section it does say you are from NY but you might want to be more clear that you are offering your services in NY itself. Just my opinion.....
Being a former proof-reader, some language/spelling issues popped out at me but 99% of the people reading your copy won't care. The photos look good and you have a good balance of info to photos.
Stay updated on your travel calendar and all should be good. Be gently persistent in seeking additional reviews and, if you're going to expand your travel cities, come to Portland (Oregon that isthank you , yes i did this personally, i have to go through it to check my grammar thanks for the tip. and yes i plan to vist soon! i jsut dont know should i stay near the airport or dwntn
yes i should definitly do that, im sure i would make more cclients posting on bp but in nyc its horrible a bunch of bullsh*ters, but you have a few here and there. i ws wondering if i can post ads on here if i upgrade to vip.
Hi,
I'd suggest turning off the music, or have it come on very low volume. Some of us peruse in public-ish places.Agreed.
No music, or an option to disable the music would be great, otherwise the site looks good!With all of the recent protests happening downtown and tying up traffic (as well as some light rail construction happening), I'd avoid staying in DT Portland for a while. Airport area hotels would probably be the best option.
I agree with the other posters. The music should go. Never want to get a prospect busted while he's browsing!
The spelling and grammar issues aren't that big a deal for me, but your gallery says "2016" which might make some think you're not active anymore. I'd suggest removing the date or post some more recent photos.
yes i agree as well i will take the music off, also about my photos, i will upate my gallery one i post my ads for my tour coming up. & thank you , that dosent soun like a bad idea
Pretty photos..... A suggestion on the rates though.
There is always discussion here about basic rate and a VIP rate that many girls offer (VIP is higher).
One can imagine what VIP means and it can be a turn off.... (when it is a higher rate)
i can agree, i went ahead and fixed that for personal reasons,i was trying to keep it sepreate just because certain guys like certain thing s, so i've decied to keep it simple, HH , FH , & my gfe sensual encounter . simple
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