Without any additional context on what/who you are ideally looking for, your particular market/budget, and the population of viable profiles in your area & search criteria, I'll give your profile a B-.

 
The length is good, medium is better than short, one- or -two lines. And better than long word walls that never get read.  You do project a sense of personality and status without appearing to brag (as braggers are typically lying and scamming.)  And assuming you have relatively good looks, you back it up with (presumably) good pics and mention of "fun/active" activities.  

 
Before I offer any specific criticisms, let's take a step back and consider what a viable SB is looking for in a profile:  
1. I'll define two, general "archetypes" that tend to represent the most viable SB's, based on their personal priorities/goals. Both of these assume you have already filtered out scammers:  
A. Money 1st:  These are SB's who have decided that they are ok with fucking a guy for much needed cash to pay for NECESSITIES like rent, food, phone.  They want to find a guy who:  
- Is "safe" (i.e.: Wont rob, maim, injure, kill her or pimp her out)
- Has cash - enough to cover her needs.
- Is good looking enough to fuck without puking.
- Is not a dick/asshole.
B. Experience 1st: These are SB's who want to taste the "good life" they cannot attain on their own. They want cash to pay for WANTS (as opposed to necessities) and they want access to top-tier services and experiences. Having sex with an older guy is not a moral problem, and they may even get off on it. They want to find a guy who:
- Is safe
- Has cash - enough to cover her wants (dinners, shopping, 1st class air, front row center tickets, etc.)  
- Is fun, has an engaging, perhaps a mentoring (without condescending) attitude and who she may have dated as a civilian if he was closer to her age.  
- Is dependable, and flexible.  
- is not a dick/asshole/demeaning/etc.  

 
Each of these types has overlapping criteria for an SD:  
- They generally are not interested in guys looking (exclusively) for multiple temporary parking spots for their penis. They may not mind if he has more than on SB, but they do not want to be number 71 in his body count goal of 100+ babes this year.  
- They don't want guys who are "cheap" and constantly try to minimize allowance or "date spend."

 
Beyond that, criteria may vary... but it will generally align with the archetypes defined above.  

 
Now back to your profile:  
- As others have noted, humor (including some self-deprecating), and a casual and fun tone are good.
- I suggest you avoid any implied or explicit filters in your text.  So the "I have a type" bit should be removed.  You know your specific physical criteria, no need to call it out and risk a POT SB self-rejecting.
- The animals are SD gold. One or two pics (no more) to sell it works.  
- The seeking section can focus on non-BCD activities that you want to share, and the desire to move forward is good. But don't exclude those who may need time in messages to get a better "sense" of who you are and develop trust. Perhaps changing this to "I want match your pace in taking next steps..." gives her a (false) sense of control and will let her decide if she wants fast or slow.  
- Travel: make this a perk not a man-slut issue. Be careful about implying you want to bang chicks in three work cities. Perhaps flip it to "maybe you can join me when I travel to fun places like Chicago, NY, Paris."

 
Finally critique every sentence and paragraph through the likely lens of the SB's you want to meet. Does this align with the criteria SHE has for ME?  

I'd love to hear your results if you make any of the suggestions provided here by the team.  

 
Life is good

 
The Cat