What do you want to see when you are looking at a provider's website. Do you like it to be straight forward to the point : Photos - Rates - Policies - Contact Info. OR would you rather a website that takes the time to give you insight into who the provider is as a person, their likes and dislikes, and other information about themselves? I personally feel like a lot of websites are too.... frigid when they don't give you any insight into who the provider is. And I don't mean the description that are common. "I'm a classy lady who loves to spend time with discerning gentlmen". Tells me nothing about who you are. But saying something like, "Laughter is life's best medicine, so I love to spend time with someone who has a great sense of humor".  
I mean I know this isn't a dating service. Yet, I would still like to think those who are coming to see me would like to get to know me a bit too. '

I tend to like very simple sites...simply a nice set of pics that show who I will see...as that is why I am looking here.

Anything more is wasted effort IMHO

When the lady tells a little about herself and her background.  To me that gives it a little more of a  personal feel.  I think that your website is awesome and has a very good balance!

Men are 'visual' creatures and shop with their eyes first, words second if at all (most of you anyway)

As for conveying your (or mine or hers) personality in a paragraph...I'm simply not smart enough to be able to do that...either convey or read it from someone else.

Remember I said women created the spoken language, to keep mans mind occupied, whilst not having sex, or eating.  

Posted By: TaylorSteele

Men are 'visual' creatures and shop with their eyes first, words second if at all (most of you anyway)

As well neither are many guys...well, some like Rod perhaps..and maybe MZ too.

Posted By: TaylorSteele

Men are 'visual' creatures and shop with their eyes first, words second if at all (most of you anyway)

beer with your buddy.......are you 'feeding' each other yet...I think so, go ahead, get another. Who's buying btw? I doubt OSP can afford a Busch draft let alone a bottle, can you be a gent a cover him.... Ok, back to the matter at hand...

Keep the nuts & bolts separate from the personal stuff, and make each easily accessible.  The gents that want to cut to the chase can do so, those that value getting a little in your head to fuel the fantasy can easily get to what they like.  Simple.

If you want to attract the types of guys who are looking for a pile of fuck holes, post really explicit photos and use the word "cum" as much as possible. If you want to attract the types of guys who are looking for a cool, sexy chick, then by all means write about your personality! Just keep it real and you're good to go, boo.

I'm the kind of guy who likes to goof around, and be silly.
One time. It didn't go over too well with a provider I saw.
She was very serious, and guarded, and the way I was/am upset her.
So. I agree.. It's nice to know a little about my providers personality..
This way.. She won't want to kick my ass.. :

Around here we drink Private Stock and Natty Boh, the big bottles as a matter of fact.

Please don't bring a jaguar to the appointment unless it's a car. You may bring a panther, but only because I admire his board presence.

beer and Busch, well Busch is Busch, piss water. That's what I picture you two drinking on this fine evening. Remember, it's all in what we conjure up in our minds But I am sorry, you can't book with me, you're not my type lol.

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I'm trying to find creative ways to write what to expect in order to attract gents who will truly enjoy their time with me.

And if I brought Panthera...could be fun  LOL

The only thing once a potential client has seen your pictures, we need to see different ones, at least I do.

and has something meaningful to say.

While we're not on a dating site, finding men who are a good match is key. They are more likely to return, which eliminates screening for us, and first meeting jitters for him.

It took a while buy many gals figured out how to fool guys with well done sites, prose written by folks who know how to write, and well done Aldo pics that are creatively photoshopped.

Posted By: BadCollegeGirl

If you want to attract the types of guys who are looking for a pile of fuck holes, post really explicit photos and use the word "cum" as much as possible. If you want to attract the types of guys who are looking for a cool, sexy chick, then by all means write about your personality! Just keep it real and you're good to go, boo.

it looks like my little bio worked! lol!

..and here I thought I had mastered minimal espanol with "dos mas cervaza por favor" y "donde esta la casa de putas"...

“If I had asked people what they wanted, they would have said faster horses.”

Simply put....Be yourself!

Just like cars, people have a set of stock equipment.  Details vary from one model to another, but it's still the same basic equipment.  
Show me the options.  I want to what makes you different from the rest.  Why I should  spend $300-$800+ on you?   I got a really good idea what's between your legs.  I want to know what's between your ears.  
How are you different than a $100 BP ad girl when the bottom line net result is all the same.   If the highlight of your website is to show me your tits and a beaver shot, lots of guys will call but not me.  
Give me a reason why I should contact you.  
     
That's just my opinion and what I want for my fantasy Franklins.  Others don't and what ever boils their crawfish is fine

I don't want to just see your rates and your pics. I want to try and get to know a bit more about you. What you like, what you don't like, a sense for your personality, that type of thing.  I don't necessarily need to get that from your website if you have a strong board presence. But somehow or other I do need to feel like we'll click before I book.

you ever read the label on a piece of clothing you were contemplating buying?  

fuck holes.  Something about a "connection" to make the date seem real.

all the pitch in the world isn't going to help you, make an informed purchase.

My thinking (assumption?  uh oh) is that the "pile of fuck holes" guys (seriously, write a book of bcgisms someday, I'll buy a copy) are not looking at provider websites, they're on BP or street corners.  So if that's accurate we're presupposing someone looking for a quality provider, with quality being defined as looks and skills only on one end of the spectrum, and a total package of hotness wrapped in interesting on the other, and everything in between...but NOT simply a warm female body to stick a dick in...or am I just being incredibly naive?  Wouldn't be the first time.

I want to see a glimpse of "who" she is. Most ladies will say "I'm classy, articulate, elegant, well educated... etc." and that's great, but that's "what" she is. I have to travel to hobby, the nearest hobby city to me is a two hour drive, and that's not even a city that is in TER, so the only option in that near city is Backpage and I'm sworn off BP. The reason I bring that up, is that my hobby is an investment. Sure, I try to take advantage of business travel but that isn't always to a good TER hobby city either. So, I'm spending a good chunk of money, nearly as much or more than my appointment in travel expenses. For this reason, I want to see a little glimpse of who she is so that I have a good idea that we will click, a little bit anyway, during the down time. I can get a very good idea if any particular lady is what I'm looking for as far as action goes by reading her reviews. But what will the experience be like during the down time. When I spent time with my ATF, who is now retired (sadly for me and happily for her), I looked forward to the down time nearly as much as the action. She always rocked my world, but I liked "who" she was as well. I told her, and I mean it, that I'm a better person for having known her. There is a lady that I will see soon, that has an amazing website, you can see that she spent time putting it together and she gives that "glimpse" of who she is. I already know that the appointment with her will be amazing, reviews and who she is.

the reason they sell it in 24 packs is that you need to drink that many to get a buzz on (I think it's 3.2 by volume), and it gives me a headache if I drink it (so I don't anymore). By the way, I got your point, that his response is typical of a Busch drinker. I've been drinking (Bourbon tonight) and I'll run off on a tangent easily when the Bourbon starts flowing. Oh crap, excuse me, I must retrieve another.

If a lady has her site set up well with tabs, then ChgoCPA can just ignore that part of her site and those of us who want that little extra glimpse can check it out.  I respect his opinion and view point but if you give more information than someone wants they can simply choose to ignore it. It's always smart to divide it up, even if you are targeting the person who wants the extra information.

Probably 75% of provider websites make reference to them being "elite", "educated", "VIP", "well-traveled", "cultured", or some combination of the aforementioned. Most of the providers here on this forum can legitimately claim more than one of those distinctions. I suspect it's the rare provider who is all of them.

I do prefer a site that gives me more insight into personality - I thought your site is pretty good, although possibly a little long it is fine since it intersperses photos.  That's the best aspect of it, that right away you get some insights into personality mixed with some visuals to keep you interested in both physical and mental aspects of a person.

First of all, I want to thank everyone who gave me some insight into this. I am the type of person who constantly asks for others' opinions because I know I can always be better.  

Do not piss off Dave by responding to another provider's post with constructive criticism that Dave won't read.

So I tried to keep the best of both worlds.  

Primarily, rates, location (what part of LA), age, physical stats, and photos.
Then the category of service offered.
Secondary, I look for a well-written website. Some sense of design to the site.
In addition, I like to get some idea of the provider's personality.
Is she mature (in her thinking)?
Instead of taking what she says about her personality as the facts, I take in the degree that her site evokes her essence.
If her grammar is poor, I assume that either her thinking is fuzzy or that she's writing in a second language.
If the site's design is sloppy, I assume she took very little care in constructing it, and thus will probably take little care in the session.
Whatever she tells me besides the basics, I assume there is a reason why she is telling me that about herself. That reason will communicate something about the person.

'teaser'. My website is designed for a reason, the way it is...it's simple to the eye with a few words only 'after' the photos are viewed. If the photos 'peak' the attn (not pique lol, yes I know I misspelled it for those who love to point it out)......and you care to learn more, then you can 'find' more about me in a few other places. But I believe in my heart of hearts, the 'connection' all starts with 'your' initial communication to me via email. I have learned to save that part for then...... a gentleman has to decide if he likes where he's shopping first. I can't do that for him. If after you like what I have to say lol, then he usually books a first date with me. But I rather he be comfortable with 'all' else prior to that time, so that when he makes up his mind and chooses me, there are no questions.

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there are these simple little tabs at the top categorizing whats what. rates photos calander pick what you like and skip the rest.
You are not the majority but rather the minority who *just wants the fact*
many like the personality *dribble* the lowdown on who we are.
so pick the tab you want and move on.

Post personal likes and dislikes in the about me page. Some people may like it. Also have the usual stuff about rate, pics etc

then I have some land in Florida I like to sell you. There are only two or three ways you may be able to figure out the real person (I would say 50-60%) that is, board participation, meet and greet or after a date.

One can write their fabricated personality in a paragraph. I bet, you can’t write your own personality honestly in a paragraph, no one can.  

So after reading this lengthy thread I was compelled to check out your website.  I think you have done a nice job with it.  I would say that it meets all the criteria that I need to set up an appointment if I was in your area.  Just be sure that you fulfill your promise to add more photos at some point. Nothing worse than seeing the same photos that never change, especially when there is a banner saying "New Photos Coming Soon". My former ATF was religious about changing her photos every 4 - 6 months.  She told me she would always get more calls after changing them.

A hint for the ladies. If I see that wizard of photo-shop "Adolfo Antonio" signature on your pics I'm likely too pass being I HATE false advertising.

That seems to be the fact as you present it LOL

A lot of my clients mention making their decision based on what I've written about me and, a couple mention my blog posts. Of course, plenty don't care, but they can always simply ignore it and find the info they want, while those who do care have all the info they need and more available. I have a pretty stripped down version of my old about section, now, but, I wouldn't ever get rid of it. And it's always nice to see who has read it or not. Of course, I don't care if you do or don't. I do write for fun, myself.

I would focus on the clients who you actually see and get their feedback. What was it that induced them to make an initial appointment? Was it something related to your website, if so, what was it and why did they find it so compelling? Was it something external, like a review, blather on the boards, recommendation of another hobbyist? If they're reluctant to speak out, or if you are uncomfortable asking, create a questionnaire and offer a discount or extra amenities on a future visit if they will take the time to complete and return it to you. Chalk it up as a legitimate marketing expense. Personally, and with absolutely no authority to back me up, I would think that visual images, cost, the variety of services being provided, and non-biased assessments/reviews from other clients you have seen would be the primary considerations that any new, potential clients would assess before deciding to book an appointment. I think Asa General rule that men tend to think in concrete, not abstract terms, and the more objective the data being put before them, the easier it is for them to make a decision.

Not every lady looks fake from an Aldo Shoot. I recently shot with him and the photos are a perfect representation of myself!

Thanks to all the people who took it seriously and actually answered me, please know I read every post.