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Re: A Fellatio Fornication (part I)
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Sorry...but i retrained from reading your article
i'm on a leave of absence(per/sey)!Advice from LG
No monkey spanking for 45 days..Good luck though.

Hey!  As some of you may or may not know, I write short stories, and I'm even working on a novella.  I  had something rattling around in my head last night, so thought I'd put ink to paper, so to speak:

"Fellatio Fornication:  A First Encounter with a Lover"

You call me to your elegantly-decorated den to receive me. There is no bed. You beckon me to sit in a large chair across from you. Both chairs are turned slightly to catch the warmth of the fire in the huge fireplace that dominates the room. The thought of what you may do to me both frightens and excites me at the same time.

We sit in silence for what seems like an eternity to me. I dare not speak for fear of you, but your stare makes me uncomfortable. I try to avoid your gaze, but it is not an easy task. I want desperately want to look at you. I work up the nerve and move my eyes from the floor to look at you. Your eyes penetrate my body as you look at me.

The silence and your constant gaze stretch my nerves to the breaking point. I detect a warmth that radiates from your smile as I meet your gaze with my own. Despite your silence and penetrating stare, or perhaps because of them, my fears begin to slowly evaporate. I cannot read anything in particular about your demeanor, but what I see is enough to quench my fears.


"So, my dear, how are you finding the cabin?" The unexpectedness of your soft voice startles me.


"It's fine, thank you," is the only suitable reply I can muster.


You rise from your chair and gesture that I do the same. I stand facing you. You stare deep into my eyes, unnerving me more. I look away; I am your servant and should not presume to stare at you in the eyes. 'As long as you are in this house, you are to share with me your eyes, as well as anything else that may be of interest to me,' you reply. You lean forward, gently kissing me while you wrap me in your arms.

You break the caress and undo the belt of your robe. I stare at your nakedness in the light of the fire, your glorious cock seeming to dance in its amber glow. You place your hand upon mine and guide it towards the shaft. I jump back when I touch it; frightened that I may hurt you in some way in my excitement.

You hold my hand on you firmly. Its flesh is soft, but the erection itself is rather hard. I feel it pulsing as I grasp it. You sink back into the large chair, and I am forced to kneel before you. My face is almost level with this lovely creature I now hold in my tender hands.

I study it fascinated, captivated by it. Its ridges, its shape, the deep purple-colored veins that are so clearly visible to my envious eyes. You watch me as I study you. As I watch you, my hand slowly encircles the shaft, and a rather large dollop of liquid forms at its tip. This strange substance has the appearance of thick water and as it oozes down I realize just how slippery your shaft has become. The more I use my hand, the more I grip and squeeze, the more liquid I elicit from the tip.

You smile at me. Above else, I want to please you, to show you that I am capable of pleasing you and learning from your guidance. I increase the pressure of my grip on your shaft once more and enjoy the feeling of it jump in my hand. It becomes clear that this is what I am supposed to be doing! You place your hand on to the tip of your own wonderful member and allow your fingertip to slide over the nectar that you produce with such ease. Slowly, you place your liquid-covered finger to your mouth, enjoying it.

I watch you as you do so. The feelings that it stirs within me are not the type that are easily explained. I watch once more as you coat your fingertip with more of the slippery fluid. This time, however, you place the fingertip onto my lips, as if inviting me to partake of your nectar. Obediently, I begin to lick the substance of what you now offer me. I am surprised that it does not taste nearly as bad as my imagination has led me to believe. In fact, the taste is most certainly not unpleasant. It is not gross or otherwise abhorrent, and the way I suck on your finger obviously pleases you.

"You wish to please me dear?" you inquire in a low, soft voice. I nod. I want to please you, and the awareness of my own arousal fills me with the guilty certainty that I want to please myself as well, that following your desires will satisfy this craving within me.

"You will use your tongue on my member," you say to me nonchalantly, but in a kind voice. "I will guide you as you do, so that I obtain the pleasure I require from you." Your desire is issued in such an authoritative voice that I have little choice but to oblige. I feel goose bumps pop up all over my body as you offer your 'instruction'. I am so eager to please you that I know I will do your will, regardless. I look at the strange creature throbbing in my hands and then close my eyes to get to work.

"Open your eyes, woman!" you command me. "You will watch your work" Fear washes back over me. I feel the sweat begin to trickle down my back, soaking my nightgown, as I open my eyes. I am a bit frightened; this alien is so big and my mouth so small, I pray that licking is all that you want me to do.

(part II forthcoming)

Very well written, can't wait for part II.

A thought, once read a book with my daughter that bounced from her side of the story to his side of the story with each chapter, wonder how this erotic novel would play out if we now read his side???

Sorry...but i retrained from reading your article
i'm on a leave of absence(per/sey)!Advice from LG
No monkey spanking for 45 days..Good luck though.

I am also anxiously awaiting part II.  Thanks for sharing it with us.

Swim

"Open your eyes, woman!" you command me.  "You will watch your work"  Fear washes back over me. I feel the sweat begin to trickle down my back, soaking my nightgown, as I open my eyes.  I am a bit frightened; this alien is so big and my mouth so small, I pray that licking is all that you want me to do.  
Very slowly and cautiously, I move my tongue to your shaft.  I feel you throb within my hand and stiffen even more as I touch it.  I am amazed that it feels good upon my tongue; in fact, the sensation is rather stimulating.  I maneuver my tongue slowly over over the shaft, feeling the ridges and the veins as I do so. You let out a small moan as I reach the ridge underneath the top of the shaft.
Spurred on by your response and having no wish to anger you by stopping, I administer to this area of your cock specifically.  I run my tongue slowly and softly around the ridge and from the reactions of both you and your cock beneath my tongue and your breathing, I realize that this was the right course to take.  I realize you are watching my every move, my every administration at this point.  This frightens me, but your moaning calms my nerves to a point.  
I become more confident now, and I explore you further, finding what makes you pulse and stiffen, mentally noting what seems not to work.  I relax and begin to enjoy not just the feeling of your response to my touch, but also the feeling of power that this gives over you.  Emboldened, I take the liberty of anticipating your next command, making it my choice rather than yours.
I take the just the head of your member and place it between my soft, sultry lips.  You utter a groan as I do so.
Again this spurs me on.  I take your cock a little further into my mouth.  I want to do this now; I need to do it.  I feel its power and seize hold of it.  You are powerless to resist me as I continue to explore you.  You are no longer in control, and that pleases me.  I want to control you now.  I have no idea why I do, only that this intense feeling washes over all of me.  I revel in the power and I crave more.  I run my tongue over your cock now as a kitty would wash itself, and you purr as I do so.  I take it deeper and deeper into my soft, velvety mouth as I continue to run my tongue over it.  You have no control over anything I do now, and I sense that you have to wish to, either.
As my confidence grows, I try new things with my mouth and tongue.  I watch you close your eyes as I do so.  I feel you twitch and throb even more.  I enjoy this a great deal and constantly shift my position so I can continue doing it as long as possible to work my magic on you.
Then, without warning, you grab my head and push me further onto you.  I want to gag, but find a way of stifling the reflex.  I am at first alarmed that you retake control, but I understand that you are simply responding to my actions.  I find this new sensation pleasure, and I adapt to your hurried guidance.  I permit you to guide the speed at which I take in your member.  You pump faster and faster into me and more and more I slide my lips almost entirely along its length.
I once again have control now.  You dig your fingers into my hair, but you no longer try to control the pace; you realize it’s fruitless.  But just as I have adjusted to this new rhythm, you take back the reins and arch your back to thrust yourself further into me than ever.  I know something is about to happen but have no idea what until you let out a frightening roar and you erupt into my mouth.
I feel your nectar hit the back of my throat, and again, I want to gag, but I stifle the reflex and I feel the liquid power run down the back of my throat.  It startles me with its ferocity, but then I realize that I enjoy the sensation.  The feeling was astonishing, I loved it, I took joy in it.  The flavor was nothing like anything I’ve tasted before.  I begin to yearn for it as it continues to pump into my mouth.  As its hardness subsides, I lick every last drop of nectar from it.  I lap it from you, the “high” that I received from the power I just felt driving me to continue.  I’m confused, but at this point, I’m just going with it.
As I finish my administrations to you and your glorious cock, you look down at me once more.  I do not need to hear your words to know that my actions have pleased you.  The expression of satisfaction on your face says all that needs to be said.  You say nothing else to me as you dress in your robe again.  This makes me wonder what you have planned for me tomorrow, and I wonder what I should do about the heat forming in my own loins.
As we sit in silence by the fire, I ponder why you have not touched me today.  I want you to, and still do.  My body aches for your touch.  I’m certain that you know this, so why did you deny me?  
I turn from these ponderings to a more immediate one. What am I going to do about this throbbing between my thighs?

Thanks Nadine.  I think that scenario is in most every hobbyist's dreams, I know it's damn sure in mine.

But I would have reciprocated the oral action for the girl.

Swim

Thanks for the compliment, swimtrekr.

I was writing it from the point of how much the woman enjoyed her first experience with that man.  Funny you mention it, though; I was thinking of writing her first experience with receiving oral as well....

Have a nice day.

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