I couldn't help but notice the comment about improving your writing skills relative to describing an orgasm.
I have been writing to a couple of civilian friends, and we have tried to describe for each other what an orgasm feels like. I try to describe what it feels like for a man and they try to describe what it feels like for a woman.
We have found that it is a very difficult thing to describe. I'm looking forward to your efforts.
An orgasm, once it passes the point of no return, can be a bit like a violent sneeze, or a roller coaster plunging - but 1000 times more compelling, desire-driven and primally meaningful.
See URL below.
People try to describe their orgasm: "consciousloving.com/forums/showthread.php?t=2500"
I'd say that, really, it's impossible to describe an orgasm. Apart from anything else, there's a nuance of difference with every single one - a bit like eating a favourite dish - say chilli con carne - at once recognisably similar but each time you make it it's slightly different, even using the same ingredients.
Anyhow, here's a poem which for me best encapsulates the moment of orgasm.
Rhetorical Questions Hugo Williams
How do you think I feel when you make me talk to you and won't let me stop till the words turn into a moan? Do you think I mind when you put your hand over my mouth and tell me not to move so you can "hear" it happening?
And how do you think I like it when you tell me what to do and your mouth opens and you look straight through me? Do you think I mind when the blank expression comes and you set off alone down the hall of collapsing columns?
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