Last week a friend challenged me to write a story in semi-real-time online.  We agreed on some basic plot lines and that each chapter must to be posted before I start the next.  Wanting a fairly diverse audience where else could I turn but TER.

So here's the deal.  If you don't like it you don't have to read it.  Constructive critique, discussion, and ideas for where the story goes, legal issues, etc. are very welcome.  I'm guessing that I'll do about a chapter a week (except the 1st 3 that are all coming at once).

My grammar, spelling, and punctuation are at about a 3rd grade level and without an editor on this thing I'm reliant on software.  Sorry.

Staff, I believe the story is on-topic, but if this isn't appropriate please let me know.

JTH