Hi,
This is my new site, My gallery is coming as soon please be patient.  ty xxx Shay

Big improvement Shay.  The new site looks very professional and is much better than the old one.  Great job!  Sedagive.

I agree with Seda.  This really looks professional!  Great job and I'm looking forward to seeing your gallery.

Shay,

 Nice improvement on the site;however, the navigation is a bit difficult to navigate throughout your site. The reason I said this is because I'm a webdesigner and webmaster, and if you need some help or would like to learn how to build nice sites, then respond back in the thread, and we can trade email addresses.
Anyways, nice improvement.

Site is much improved and easier to use.  Just one minor point and I hate to bring it up because it reveals me as the anal-retentive that I am, but typos (especially on documents people are using to represent themselves) bug me--on your list of turn offs, it is "body odor," not "body odder."  Any time you need anything edited just let me know.  Looking forward to seeing the gallery.

Good job. I can't wait for more pictures.  To get "picky" there are some things you might want to double check.  In the sentence, "I am a perfect, private addition to your visit or if your local your play style in San Diego" needs a rewrite.  The second "your" should be "you're" or "you are" and I think the ending of that sentenance would benefit from a complete rewrite.  Also, I couldn't get one of the "contact" buttons to work.  I'm impressed with how much you have learned about web design in such a short time.  Be proud of yourself.  If your professional skills are good as your web design skills then I have to find time to book an apppointment.  If the pictures you've promised to add to your gallery are as hot as those you've already posted then I'll probably have to book extra time!

So you want to help me navigate my site huh?  Sounds interesting.  My email is on the site. XXXShay  

Your site does the job it's supposed to do-introduce yourself to whoever may be interested in setting up an appointment. Don't worry about the spelling and syntax criticism, since I doubt anyone is going to get together with you to challenge you to a spelling bee or essay contest. I respect the fact that you learned how to put the site together yourself.

One should never assume...Maybe she forgot the "F"......

Amen.....How do you spell...breathtaking?

I agree, nice "quick" pics!

Oww, try to help a girl out and what do you get?  Kicked in the keester!  It was CONSTRUCTIVE criticism!  I knew I shouldn't have pushed the "Post Message" Button.