My question is two part.
One, Is there a way to edit a review decription that didn't come out the way you intended?
Two, If you haven't seen a young lady in a year or more and she's is still great or better. Can you review her again?

I have gone in later and re-reviewed ladies that I have already seen. Both circumstances involved my seeing that girl and something being drastically different, for example, the first session with one provider was straight GFE, I saw her again and we had a bondage session which was off the charts and I was compelled to write about it. That second review will overwrite your first one and you will not get VIP credit. Your name will only appear once in the ladies review history.

To my knowledge you cannot edit a review after a certain point and cannot change a numerical rating, which could lead to all sorts of tomfoolery by less than moral review writers.

NSF

Once a review is posted, you can't have it edited.

However, you used to be able to submit a new review of a provider after two weeks from the date of the review approval.  The old review would come down, and the new one would go up.