I just wish you had used spaces to separate the quatrains. But otherwise well crafted, witty and original.
I think we may have to reconsider Mein's award for the best poem about Priapus.
Posted By: quadseasonal
Thank you marikod. That was very generous of you.
"Having said that, I didn't quite follow Lior's post this time either."
I think Liorr was rubbing it in on Platypus that Obama's promised Bush's tax cuts "for the rich" would go away and they are here to stay.
I also think liorr "meant" to say your loss is sports board gain, meaning Platypus is on Sports board hiatus.
Platypus has only posted on SB a handful of times and he wasn't received well.
His first post was a promise,
Just this one time.
His intention was there,
But only to whine.
Complaining about stalking,
But doing the same.
In his defense,
He exhibits deranged.
Lacking substance and quite mundane.
Sports board was hoping,
He would soon refrain.
It was not to be.
His third post was more of the same,
Calling hinself Sherlock,
For what I don't know.
The riddle was solved,
Before he showed,
His imaginary word,
Brought your response.
His fourth post was more of his waste
Another!!copy and paste.
A photo for you,
To show his disdain.
For the pain you inflicted,
When he was corrected.
His fifth post was quite conflicted.
Some things can not be bought,
Acute he is not.
A blind little fish
In a big sea
My drag is set light,
Have a Good Night
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