Your site needs a serious makeover girl. You have 30 Different colors,20 different microscopic fonts, bad grammar, spelling that is worse than a 2nd grade level, etc. It's a visual, and intellectual clusterfuck.
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Your site needs a serious makeover girl. You have 30 Different colors,20 different microscopic fonts, bad grammar, spelling that is worse than a 2nd grade level, etc. It's a visual, and intellectual clusterfuck.
I can refer you to a really excellent company that is working on my new website. You have a couple of issues with your current one.
If you want clients then they need to be able to read straight to the point and not have to squint at the screen to read all of the fine point or spend 45 mins trying to find one answer.
If you want someone to have to go through the whole thing then I suggest one like Sloane's or if you want something else classier let me know.
1. Mis-spelling of words simple words that should come up in your spell check. 2. The run-on of everything. It is so jumbled up that it shows what kind of a person you are. It shows unorganized and a clutter brain at that.
Your website is very important in this business that should be the 2nd main concern next to taking care of yourself should be.
So if you would like some help feel free to pm me and I will give you the name of the company to go with.
Sorry girl not trying to beat you down but trying to help ya
Different people, different tastes : I am getting lots of compliments for this website. I am open to completely diferent approach and very creative in what I do. Sorry about the language mistakes, English is not my mother language, but I created the website all by myself. You need to give me a credit for this...? You might like this website better. Why don't you check it out and let me know: www.belladavinci.rare-playmate.com
That one looks much better!!! I was just trying to offer you some help but if you prefer to take it as an insult instead of constructive criticism then so be it!!!!
I did not HAVE to help you I chose to OFFER you advice!!!!
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