I think I made a website?

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your escortsite.com is looking REAL GOOD!!!

Just one thing is missing, a link to TER on one of its first pages!

I think I left enough breadcrumbs for guys to find you,

jazz32

You now need to spell check it.   There are a few places where things are not quite correct:

"Very simply; Quality over quanity."

Also you need to add a title for your photos page.

Also do you think you will get many takers for $150 for an hour of dinner?

Remember this is all constructive criticism.  I just want your site to be the best it can be.

I thought of signing your guestbook but wanted to save room for all the nice gentlemen here.

Kisses Haley

Sorry Haley, I forgot all about the helpful gals here!!!

jazz32

- It does not make it clear if you offer incall, outcall or each.

-  Is the 'Introductory' package required for a first time client?  Likewise is the 2-hour package reserved only for repeat clients?

- The 'Etiquette' page seems to really be the start of a 'FAQ' page.  If the intent is to list a series of questions and answers over time, it would be better to label the naviagation link 'FAQ'.

-  I realize this is a first cut.  Just be sure to either complete the other pages or remove them from the home/navigation page as they serve no purpose if left in their template state.

Good luck Leah...

It looks very good.  As do you, your blue eyes are very striking in the photos.  

I would make two suggestions:

1.  On the services tab you state "I will provide you with an etiquette list."  This is then followed by the standard disclaimer about discussing rates listed as #1.  Is this the only item on your etiquette list?  If there is only one item you probably don't need to introduce it as a list.  People will stop reading if there is too much text.  Also you could add that disclaimer on the contact page, since that is a rule you would like followed when being contacted.

2. Check the spacing and fonts on your contact page.  The text is running together and could use a few hard returns.


Congratulations on the accomplishment!

Good start Leah.  I will not repeat what has already been said.  My additional suggestion would be to choose some different colors for some of your text.  Seems like a lot of pink to me.  Some pink in the right places is good--LOL.

Curse web sites.
I'll work on the rewriting this weekend.  I still like my eros and GFE better, but I'm working on it. I can't seem to change the 70' wa wa wa wa porno look, which I dislike.
Yes, I do get 150. for dinner and drinks. It's a great get to know you & usually a tip) It very rearely ends with dinner though. I got asked by so many men for a free meet and greet, which takes my time, my travel, etc that I decided, look if I'm going to use this time to get ready, go out there, it ought to be worth something, yes?
What I found is just having dinner isn't enough, they like to grope. So I stopped doing free meet and have cocktails. I need to work on the rates and everything else, I'm just proud I got the damn thing up!
Kisses
Ya'll are a great help to me.  Thanks!