Would like some feed back before I email the provider as I am brand new to this as to what to say and not to say. I am a polite person and I have read a lot of ways people dont want to be talked to so is just stating I would like to see you at such and such a proper line in for a first time guy. I dont want to scare the girl off because she has great reviews and I am kinda looking forward to my trip and getting through this first time nerves thing.

it will allow you to avoid a pressure situation that might be uncomfortable for a noob, and also to compose and review your thoughts.

Big no-nos?

using foul language
using explicit or suggestive language
asking explicit questions
mentioning sex in any way
mentioning money outright

Other than that, be polite and concise.

Expect to have to deal with screening -

references from other providers

references from services: date-check, preferred411 etc

reference established by employment verification

Good luck!

GTM

... so you don't need to be explicit about activity nor beat around the bush.

Be explicit about DAY & TIME & length (hours) you want to see or meet her.

Be explicit about who you are: name, local/visitor

Be explicit about how & when she can contact you.  If phone, be explicit if she can leave a private message or not.

You have hit the nail on the head: "just stating I would like to see you at such and such"

Oh, your first time should always be an incall. Don't do outcalls with any provider unless you've seen them before and are quite comfortable with them.

There is nothing wrong with an outcall date to your hotel room.  You have selected the lady because of your research and she has done the same.  When I travel on business, I would sometimes have a lady come to my hotel for an evening of playtime.

I have never and will never have a lady come to my home.

When you contact her for the first time asking if she is available do yourself a favor and send her any information she will need verify you at this time.  This information should be clearly stated on the providers web site.  By sending her your verification information now you are showing her you are not a time waster, and you are someone it is safe to contact.  Do not expect to be hear back from ladies you only send a message saying I would like to see you with an email or telephone #.  Most ladies will not contact until you can be verified.  goodluck
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So thank you very much for your insight I sent out the email and everything went great for my first time with a provider.. Thanks everyone