I just posted my first review here. Does anyone care to critique it for me?
Thanks,
noke

Good job. Very detailed. Thought I was reading Penthouse Forum. lol. Sounds like you enjoyed yourelf and that's what it's about. I am newbie too. Have not posted a review yet. Looking forward to it. Enjoy!

Detail is great but ot make it easier for the rest of us to read if  I may suggest the use of paragrahs?
Otherwise folks will read the first three to four lines and drop out.

JMHO

RX

How could I forget paragraphs? I'll keep that in mind next time.
I was always better in the sciences anyway..

Dude, Paragraphs! I'll be honest, I tend to write lengthy reviews myself but yours was just too much for me to deal with. If you make it too long a lot of guys will not bother to read it. Detail is important but it's not penthouse forum, it's just a review. Trust me I know how difficult it can be to try and edit your work but in the long run it makes for a more effective review.
Just my opinion of course, glad you had a good time!

You're not allowed to see her again this lifetime. LOL

What will you give your next provider if she's better looking and provides better service than this one?

Over half of this gal's many pages of reviews were 10's on performance!  Wow- next time to Las Vegas.............


Looks- probably an 8 she is really hot but not model or once in a lifetime.  Yet he does get room for "in the eyes of the beholder"!  

But you do have to watch the 10's- too many once in a lifetimes and you are either a cat with nine lives or you lose credibility!

You obviously did your homework and picked a winner for your first!  Good Job!

My review is probably on her 3rd page, and I'd agree that she has a phenomenal talent.  I can see where a first-timer would think he died & went to heaven.

I learned a few years ago that I'd given out my only 10-10, and have yet to regret anything about that.  Bre didn't live up to that experience for me.  Still, I've read other reviews that offered less justification for a 10-10.

As a rule, guys heading to LV would be well served to add her to their list.  Having said all that, I know Jazz is getting ready to gorge himself on turkey, and I don't want this to sound like shilling.  LOL.

LOL, isn't a 10/10 a one-time-deal?

I'm not superstious, but if anyone of you guys are, you might want to be careful with that second 10/10, lest that be the end ( of your lifetime that is)

Bre is attractive but like a few others have said, probably not a 10.  In 5+ years of doing this, I've given one 10 in appearance.  She can earn multiple 10's in performance.  The key word here is earn.  I've also found you can have a great time with someone who only earns an 8.  It is partially about the chemistry of the fantasy.

If I ever suspect another 10-10, one of us might die.  9's are a damn good thing, LOL

OK, I get it. I will watch it with the 10's lest I be un-credible. In the context of "once in a lifetime" I might could drop the appearance down a tad, but if I have another 10 performance wise I will eat my words and be a very happy guy eating them.

And I will definitely throw in paragraph breaks so I won't wear you out with my endless stream.

As for sounding like a Penthouse letter, I could have left a few lines out and still described the experience adequately. But now that you mention it, I felt like I was IN a Penthouse letter. It really was that good for me.

Dont get caught up in comfort with a provider excusing performance that is less than what you or others would expect. A 10 better suck a dick like Jenna Jameson and an 8 better not suck like the prude who asks if she's doing it right and makes you want to just finish yourself.