Dear Val:

You look lovely, however "Pettite" is spelled: "p-e-t-i-t-e" and
"brunnette" spelled: "b-r-u-n-e-t-t-e".

Your use of future conditional tense :"if you like to spend some quality time with me" requires the word "would" or
"could".

Other than your spelling and grammar, you look fine.