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impposter 49 Reviews 341 reads
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I thought haiku poems were
1 2 3-4 5-6 7

Seven - five - seven
1-2 3 4-5

Anyone know how to count?
1-2-3 4 5 6 7


In praising of the snakecharmer
1 2-3 4 5 6-7-8

I sigh and I moan
1 2 3 4 5

lightbeams of seduction…………….moonlust
1-2 3 4-5-6 .... 7-8


Flaming hair, smoking body
1 - 2  3  4-5 6-7

Must change e-mail --
1 2 3 4

Iaminlovewithlana"
1-2-3-4-5-6-7

Lanagfenyc878 reads

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In praising of the snakecharmer

I sigh and I moan

lightbeams of seduction…………….moonlust




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hnman365 reads

Love the haiku and the photo.  In response, I can only write:

"Flaming hair, smoking body

Must change e-mail --

Iaminlovewithlana"

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impposter342 reads

I thought haiku poems were
1 2 3-4 5-6 7

Seven - five - seven
1-2 3 4-5

Anyone know how to count?
1-2-3 4 5 6 7


In praising of the snakecharmer
1 2-3 4 5 6-7-8

I sigh and I moan
1 2 3 4 5

lightbeams of seduction…………….moonlust
1-2 3 4-5-6 .... 7-8


Flaming hair, smoking body
1 - 2  3  4-5 6-7

Must change e-mail --
1 2 3 4

Iaminlovewithlana"
1-2-3-4-5-6-7

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guy69696969397 reads

There are many forms of haiku.

More important than the forms is the aesthetic. A genuine haiku usually evolves from a satori.

Haiku uses imagery and at it's simplest is a comparison, contrast, or association.

What most people call haiku is referred to as "Desk haiku"....meaning it's just a bs jumble of words.

True haiku is awesome stuff.......

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