1) Grammar and Spelling as really got to be at the top of the list. Is it too much effort to slap the text into a Word doc and check it?

2) Yeah I can do without the music for other reasons than most. If you must use music to make the website complete to you try elevator music. If I am interested in getting close and personal, I lose interest with the rap music blaring away.

3) Photos could be several categories; too old, no smiles (hate that), used with cheesy websites, where the photos do not expand beyond postage stamp size, clearly no effort to care, covering various body areas to avoid exposure, and any pics that include loverboy62, lmfao Oh, and stop thinking that just showing your bung hole in photos drives men to your door. It may, but perhaps all the wrong men. Stay revealing but classy.

4) If you have playmates, try to get some photos of you and those playmates together, without redirecting the viewer to another website. What's total package look like side by side, be it vertical or horizontal.

5) Very limited "About Me" or "Introduction" text. Please tell us about yourself. What do you like, besides rich, generous, gentleman? What sort of dates do you like? Just sayin... there could be more, a lot more in many cases.

6) Services section is explicit!! What is wrong with a gal that includes in her services every sexual act acronym known to man? A lot.

7) Have not taken the time to even put up rates on  the website. No wonder gents have to ask the supposedly bad questions over the phone or email. You leave them no choice.

8) Lastly, most men KNOW this is a fantasy. Keep creating that fantasy with that website for them.

As for "ads" a lot could be said. One that bothers me is the same boilerplate ad every 7 days constantly verbatim. Booooring. Please make some effort to be creative. Yes, it does take some effort, but nothing gained is easy. If you post locally take notice of some real professionals such as Samantha Sommers, Lustful Tori, LaRue McCay and others that make the effort.

A special note here: Get rid of your pimp if you have one and write your own stuff and keep all your own earned money in doing so. You know who you are.