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Another Limerick...
srtman 35 Reviews 1157 reads
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Another Limerick...

Jack and Jill went up the hill to smoke a little reef.
Jack got high
Unzipped his fly
And Jill said "where's the beef"?

BigPapasan 3 Reviews 536 reads
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2 / 7
I like Dice's version better.....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wN42OjeRHCA

mrfisher 115 Reviews 430 reads
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3 / 7
Cute but technically not a limerick....

Limericks are five lines with an AABBA rhyme pattern

Molly Feinstein See my TER Reviews 399 reads
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4 / 7
Who Says eom


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PlusTip 465 reads
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5 / 7
So change it to...

ck and Jill up the hill holding a silly leaf
At the top they sat and smoked some reef
Jack Got high
Started to unzip his fly  
And Jill smirked "where's the beef"

srtman 35 Reviews 328 reads
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6 / 7
Seriously? Lol. eom


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mrfisher 115 Reviews 398 reads
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7 / 7
I hate to be the poetry police but...

Someone has to enforce the rules.

Otherwise, you could have your poetic license revoked
Related Link: Note the use of the word "strict".

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