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very interesting concept! I like it

Hi there:

I've re-designed my website, and I'd sincerely appreciate feedback on:

- the lay-out.
- the font/colors/design.
- the photo choices.
- what you like about my new site, what you like about my old site that isn't there.

Thank you thank you!

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Best looking WIX site I have ever seen.  Impressive.

very interesting concept! I like it

notlong331 reads

i could say i had tapped in :)

.... sense of style and abundance of creativity are unreal. GREAT site!

It strikes a balance between being easy to navigate and being so utterly unique and void of the standard jargon that it is unforgettable. A true one of a kind.  

And most importantly of all, "A Beaker of Syrup"? Seriously? :) Awesome beyond belief. :)

Excellent job, beautiful you

To Alyx/Oneperday/Shae/notlong --

Thank you all so much for the complements [blushing]...

Alxy, I love the 'date-alyx' theme... and would very much like to go on a 'date' with you in the not-so-far-off... I do believe you're coming to Chicago quite soon... and also, that a brunch is overdue ;-)

Posted By: DateAlyx
.... sense of style and abundance of creativity are unreal. GREAT site!  
   
 It strikes a balance between being easy to navigate and being so utterly unique and void of the standard jargon that it is unforgettable. A true one of a kind.  
   
 And most importantly of all, "A Beaker of Syrup"? Seriously? :) Awesome beyond belief. :)  
   
 Excellent job, beautiful you!  
   
 

I believe your opening should have clear navigation setup. Clever, though, once I worked around the site.

Thanks for that feedback. There's a straight-forward navigation-bar at the bottom of the homepage (trailmap), but depending on the settings of your computer & monitor size, you may have to scroll down to see it.

I'll make the standard navigation on the homepage more visible, and ad links back to the homepage so it's easier. Thanks again!

Posted By: Hardwood469
I believe your opening should have clear navigation setup. Clever, though, once I worked around the site.

and  navigate, and your Theme is more developed. Very Well Done!
The colors are "Au natural" which is apropos.... Your site is Fresh and  Fun.
I'm intrigued by your "long form" submission......I'll have to dive into that soon ;-), but for NYT op ed? Really.... more intrigue....
As it seems to be part of the design.....most of the pictures are slightly "grainy", as opposed to out of focus.
this would be the only draw back IMHO. perhaps a higher mp on the camera(s)
Your pics are fresh, and your seasonal take on the pics is cute.

Overall, Your Site reads Well.

FYI.....I like the pink tie and pantie theme in pics.....you look good in mans shirt after .....

As for your blog question I'll get back to you in Private about the answer......but I'll leave you with a quote from the author on one of my favorites of His....

“So be sure when you step, Step with care and great tact. And remember that life's A Great Balancing Act. And will you succeed? Yes! You will, indeed! (98 and ¾ percent guaranteed) Kid, you'll move mountains.”   ;-)

Love the way you used creative content to inner link with who you are.  
All links work, my only concern is the picture on Shadyville Etiquette, the one in left margin in black dress.  
Upper Left corner the Word "Escort" is over the top of another word.....

I love the website very much ..... I am going through the revamp process and it is not easy.  

Kisses  
JC

Nice site and definitely unique.

Michelle Rene

Pictures are alluring, text and concept while a bit cute for me, show real wit, creativity and intelligence. The look does recall some sort of park service site, which adds to the effect. Nice site, and one that has everything needed to attract me.

Not perfect, though, so here are a few suggestions/comments.

Since there is so much going on, the site loads a little slowly (I used IE just for variety's sake). You can either view that as a problem for some (on low speed connections or with short attention spans) or as a screening technique to eliminate such clients. The navigation works pretty well, but the obscure names for the menu choices goes a little over the line for me. Even some who might have the wit and wherewithal to play will be put off by that. You might want to put more informative descriptions below the current items so Tap might have (about) below it, Syrup could have (images), Water could say (necessities), Climb (to meet). Forecast seems reasonably self-explanatory. I know that it detracts from the overall effect, but it makes the site more easily usable, a necessary goal, even if it may reduce the glorious artistry of it all. Remember, you have less than a minute to reel someone in, and if they cannot easily find what they want, you lose them.

Now I get the reference to Shadyville.

zig

really like the new site, I know you've been thinking about a re-design or complete change up, I think this is the perfect in-between.  
cheeky and professional at same time.

xo

But the old one was hard to navigate.  I think this is a big improvement while keeping all the kooky aspects of the old one.  

Posted By: MidwesternMaple
Hi there:  
   
 I've re-designed my website, and I'd sincerely appreciate feedback on:  
   
 - the lay-out.  
 - the font/colors/design.  
 - the photo choices.  
 - what you like about my new site, what you like about my old site that isn't there.  
   
 Thank you thank you!  
   
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