: Boston Buzz Discussion : Re: Good luck and some small grammar pointers

bostoneb See Agency Profile 1927 reads

posted 13 years ago

1 / 15

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clearthynker 306 Reviews 798 reads

posted 13 years ago

2 / 15

Good luck and some small grammar pointers

Good luck with your launch!

It seems like you are running a high end service, so you'll want to cast a high end image. I noticed a couple of issues where you used the word "there" incorrectly. Allow me to try and help:

- when you are talking about a place, use THERE. ("I look forward to meeting you there")

- when you want to say "they are" like the title of your post, use THEY'RE ("they're finally here")

- when you want to talk about belonging to use THEIR ("Our ladies set their own rates")

Please don't take any offense, I'm just trying to be helpful..

MonsterJazzII 2 Reviews 598 reads

posted 13 years ago

3 / 15

Reviews?

Do any of your ladies have any reviews?

M

bostoneb See Agency Profile 645 reads

posted 13 years ago

4 / 15

Thank you!!!! We are still working on it....

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LamontCranston69 621 reads

posted 13 years ago

5 / 15

I think the work your looking for is "Their" not there

But something else got my attention looking over the lovely ladies in your site I did notice that most of them are from the now closed Flirt Escorts. https://www.slixa.com/flirt-escorts.

But then I noticed the photos of Brianna, Something didn't look right, So I looked into it.

The photo in the bottom left corner is From Aldo Antonio, A photo most guys will remember, But there was something funny about the other 3 photos, So I looked into it and found this:
http://www.gardenofedenescorts.com/spdir/opensp/id/1358192279ad998a3b70ef4fba82a918bf4ae212b1

Found the exact same photos on a Canadian website for Kaylani, and a London Website http://www.desire-girls.co.uk/girls/angel-petersfield under the name Angel.

Now you list Brianna as Hispanic, but the Canadian site list her as Asian.

Things that make you go Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.

P.S. just so you know, I did take a screen shot of the page.

The lady in question

theolperfesser 313 Reviews 701 reads

posted 13 years ago

6 / 15

Re: Good luck and some small grammar pointers

I agree. Proofread your website carefully and you will find several other mistakes. If you want to appeal to professionals, present a professional-looking product. That said, when will Jasmeen be in town???

bostoneb See Agency Profile 701 reads

posted 13 years ago

7 / 15

I'm getting to the bottom of this right now!!

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Foodyguy 29 Reviews 679 reads

posted 13 years ago

8 / 15

Good pointers, but I believe "They are" is what was needed....e

-- Modified on 12/31/2013 12:25:51 PM

-- Modified on 12/31/2013 12:26:38 PM

bostoneb See Agency Profile 711 reads

posted 13 years ago

9 / 15

In 2 weeks!!!

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bostoneb See Agency Profile 747 reads

posted 13 years ago

10 / 15

Yes Brianna, Ryan, Jasmeen, Amanda

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MonsterJazzII 2 Reviews 498 reads

posted 13 years ago

11 / 15

Re: I think the work your looking for is "Their" not there

Good work!

I will definitely wait and see. There are a lot of quirky things going on for an upscale organization. Hmmmm......

Who is going to take one or two for the team?

Mj

Posted By: LamontCranston69

But something else got my attention looking over the lovely ladies in your site I did notice that most of them are from the now closed Flirt Escorts. https://www.slixa.com/flirt-escorts.

But then I noticed the photos of Brianna, Something didn't look right, So I looked into it.

The photo in the bottom left corner is From Aldo Antonio, A photo most guys will remember, But there was something funny about the other 3 photos, So I looked into it and found this:
http://www.gardenofedenescorts.com/spdir/opensp/id/1358192279ad998a3b70ef4fba82a918bf4ae212b1

Found the exact same photos on a Canadian website for Kaylani, and a London Website http://www.desire-girls.co.uk/girls/angel-petersfield under the name Angel.

Now you list Brianna as Hispanic, but the Canadian site list her as Asian.

Things that make you go Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.

P.S. just so you know, I did take a screen shot of the page.

The lady in question

LamontCranston69 555 reads

posted 13 years ago

12 / 15

I have to ask, did you have the same company that did the Obamacare website

do your website, You fixed the Brianna problem, but what about the Ryan & Dylan problem.
You also should have link to reviews of the ladies that are working for you. Also you should know what girls have reviews

Savannah: http://www.theeroticreview.com/reviews/show.asp?id=239864
You forgot about Savannah, and Emma has reviews to.

When the gentleman asked about reviews, he was looking for you to supply a link to them, not a list of who has them

sexy1jill See Agency Profile 1195 reads

posted 13 years ago

13 / 15

would you kindly remove both Emma and Savannah from your wesbsite

Neither Savannah or Emma are represented by you. I am representing them both. It would be greatly appreciated if you would remove their pictures from your website.
Thank you
Jill

Posted By: bostoneb

It is almost 2014 and let your New Year begin with a positive change, New Ladies and Excellent Service!!!

Boston EB is a New, Upscale agency that has many different Ladies available (guaranteed to put a smile on your face)

It is hard finding someone that you can connect with or even find attractive but here at Boston EB, chemistry, beautiful ladies and classy you will find!!!

Check out the website and contact us ( via email ) to set up an appointment ( same day appointments are available ) and start New Year with a bang!!!!

Dr.Freud 864 reads

posted 13 years ago

14 / 15

What a tangled web we weave...

you seem to have some pretty big issues.
I suggest you get a handle on them and try and launch again but cleaner honest and informed about your own ladies, whos who and real pics.

Install spell check so you can no longer worry if you spelled there their or they're right.
If English is not your first language it can be Very tricky. Even to the point of being stupid. Our spellings sometimes make no sense.

good luck...

Dr.Freud 552 reads

posted 13 years ago

15 / 15

and you spelled to instead of too Two can play at that game

if you correct someone else you should probably spell check your own post.