Well, I have been out of the hobby for a long time but I thought I would jump in.  I just posted a new review (it should be out in 72 hours).  But here is the thing...I know I am not good at writing them.  So guys, here is your chance to help a fellow hobbiest out.  Critique me, let me know how it could have been better and what I am lacking in my litterary style.  I know I am posting the message early but what the heck?  No time like the present!

Your friendly neighborhood,
  WillOrWil

just tell the truth at what happend with the provider you were with

Personally, I thought you did a great job with your latest review.  It was articulate, described in sufficient detail what type of session you had, and clearly showed your enthusiasm for the provider.  I only wish many others would follow your fine example.  Here's a link to the review, for those who'd like to check it out:
http://theeroticreview.com/reviews/show.asp?id=48333


For additional reading, check out MBIG's recent review of Pleasure Playhouse's Ashley.  I 'almost' feel sorry for the guy (she's been publicly dinged here on TER so many times I can't count),  but at least he managed to apply a sense of humor to his awful experience:
http://theeroticreview.com/reviews/ShowReview.asp?Review=300741&user=235861

In particular, this line is simply priceless:
"...By this time I was over trying the 40 basic moves of ballet to get this girl excited..."

Why Ashley continues to get business (and why Pleasures Playhouse puts up with her practices in the first place) is beyond me.

- atl_mgr

-- Modified on 9/30/2004 1:30:40 AM

Thanks you two!  I guess I spent too much time reading other people's reviews and just felt that mine weren't as entertaining.  You gotta admit, some people are really good at writing them!  But I guess I missed the whole point of the reviews in my litterary envy which is to impart relevant info...  I will follow your advice to me and just stick with the facts then.  Thanks!


Your friendly neighborhood,
 WillOrWil