I could claim that my review of Brooklyn is so shabbily worded because my brains were still scrambled from my time with her, but I'd be lying, it was twelve hours after the wonderful rendezvous when I typed up the review and by eight hours later I could see straight again and everything.  So its my bad, not hers.  The reason why the review reads so poorly is that apparently TER has gotten much more efficient of late at posting submitted reviews, and I used to be able to go back the day after submitting a review and proof read and revise, for the reader's benefit, but this one was approved and posted after not much more than 12 hours or so, and by the time I got out of today's meeting and went to do my editing, it was posted.  The content is all there as I intended, the numbers and acronyms are all things I stand by, but the grammar and typos are an embarrassment to my teachers.  And no, I did not go to an Atlanta Public School.