but your use of a dangling participle is one of the most frequent grammatical errors in the English language. (I made that distinction up but I'm usually right lol) ) I can help you with proper sentence structure if you'd like.
It seems that this has somehow escaped the Grammar Police for the past year or so that I've been haunting this board ... but I'm sure PS can find an instance of this instructional guidance in the archives. I'm a frequent offender but I'm not about to call myself out when I do. lol
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