Not a put down, but, could you possibly get someone to do your typing? ( it's very hard to read )
To be honest, i think it would go along way in helping your biz!!
Maybe it doesn't matter to some guys, but to some it does!!
Some guys relate poor grammer and english, to BP hoes and Street Walkers. ( i'm sure, your neither ) I know if your web-site looks anything like the above, i would be a little leary to book an appontment with you. ( as in, maybe your performance lacks also )
Just think it would go along way in making you look Professional. If your gonna walk the walk, ya gotta talk the talk.